Well I am very impressed Number 5 Max! this week end I am going all out for promo & hopingto get us signed?...Yeah?
To all those who helped us reach Number 5 (Music For The World)...thank you...staggs Max Lisa-Jane & todds or 'Music For The World..

Such bad form of me..

I have been using my time on here to set the record strait about the tune and to chill the home boy critics, I almost forgot..

here is some feedback from other forums..

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I have always been one to enjoy songs that touch me in the heart. This one touched me there. A lot of us have been in the position that we wished we could make a deal with God. Unfortunately it doesn't work that way. The lyrics are awesome!

I like the spacey, distant dissonance in the background. Especially in the very beginning when it goes a little out of key. A nice mood setter.

The guitar is tone is very fitting and very tasteful fills. Nice work!

The vocals have a good sense of pain and sorrow to them. Delivered very well!

The drums tone of the drums didn't set well with me. A little too subdued or something. Are you using brushes??

An awesome song in my opinion!

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I am not a big God guy and to me it wasn't preachy at all.

Very melancholy vibe, has a "Sylvia's Mother" kind of sadness. That's a compliment, I love that tune!

I thought the vocs represented the desperation of the circumstance well (that's what I dig about the aforementioned Hook tune). Good lyrics, the playing was sweet, production value was killer. Not a fan of the thunder and such, but this is great tune, man.

Very nice job

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You really are on to something here.....Interesting concept ....everything sits where it's supposed to

Sounds excellent....Keep on bringing it

Steve Altonian

http://www.soundclick.com/stevealtonian

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Hi Max.....WELCOME GOOD TO HAVE YOU HERE .HOPE TO HEAR MORE FROM YOU.

This song is great .....in every aspect .

The only thing that threw me, is the singer making a deal with God ,to take him instead ....People do this out of desperation ,but God would never make that kind of a deal ....

You could keep it in there ,asking God to make a deal ... Deal or no deal LOL

No deal !.But an experience with God could occur ,and He lets the singer ,live too.

This is my take on this one.

As for the rest of the song ,the music /vocals all very good ,indeed .

Clairejeanne

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staggman wrote:

Well I am very impressed Number 5 Max! this week end I am going all out for promo & hopingto get us signed?...Yeah? To all those who helped us reach Number 5 (Music For The World)...thank you...staggs Max Lisa-Jane & todds or 'Music For The World.. :lol:

Well, I think we have likely reached our threshold with this song at SOundclick..

it is my experience one can campaign a song to topp 20 in a few days, then it tapers off and goes down fast..

The only ones who seem to manage to hold ratings are the kids who have paid soundclick subscriptions.. but even then, it does them no good in practical application..

It's just fun stuff and has been a blast getting everyone slightly riled up.. remember, there is NO such thing as BAD publicity when it comes to getting plays.. *G*

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Is that why Lisa-Jane who is in our Band nearly split her sides laughing & said God these Bozo's are Brilliant Great god or bad opinions are good for us! She used to be signed to a Good band...but Motherhood took over but God she can sing...& thinks most the members on Click are Comedians or Clowns! really!

She hasn't laughed so mch since her old Granny Died! Well done for winding that lot up Max How about we met God on Mars for our next number?

Or we would wash away your sins but from America to England there just ain't enough water!
Well somethin like that it's a gas for sure!...stagg

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staggman wrote:

Is that why Lisa-Jane who is in our Band nearly split her sides laughing & said God these Bozo's are Brilliant Great god or bad opinions are good for us! She used to be signed to a Good band...but Motherhood took over but God she can sing...& thinks most the members on Click are Comedians or Clowns! really! She hasn't laughed so mch since her old Granny Died! Well done for winding that lot up Max How about we met God on Mars for our next number? Or we would wash away your sins but from America to England there just ain't enough water! Well somethin like that it's a gas for sure!...stagg

met God on Mars has potential.. *L*

After all, we are designated to land there in year 2036

I will be checking in soon, for the next two nights I am going to be running some sounds for the local community arts center.. A nice enjoyable gig for a (mostly) great group of folks..

Talk with you soon!

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staggman wrote:

Well I am very impressed Number 5 Max! this week end I am going all out for promo & hopingto get us signed?...Yeah? To all those who helped us reach Number 5 (Music For The World)...thank you...staggs Max Lisa-Jane & todds or 'Music For The World.. :lol: Such bad form of me.. I have been using my time on here to set the record strait about the tune and to chill the home boy critics, I almost forgot.. here is some feedback from other forums.. __________________ BASSMAN Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Oklahoma Posts: 9,262 I have always been one to enjoy songs that touch me in the heart. This one touched me there. A lot of us have been in the position that we wished we could make a deal with God. Unfortunately it doesn't work that way. The lyrics are awesome! I like the spacey, distant dissonance in the background. Especially in the very beginning when it goes a little out of key. A nice mood setter. The guitar is tone is very fitting and very tasteful fills. Nice work! The vocals have a good sense of pain and sorrow to them. Delivered very well! The drums tone of the drums didn't set well with me. A little too subdued or something. Are you using brushes?? An awesome song in my opinion! ________________________ September 27th, 2007, 05:41 PM BKent I thumbed the diesel down Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Glenside, PA. USA Posts: 1,186 I am not a big God guy and to me it wasn't preachy at all. Very melancholy vibe, has a "Sylvia's Mother" kind of sadness. That's a compliment, I love that tune! I thought the vocs represented the desperation of the circumstance well (that's what I dig about the aforementioned Hook tune). Good lyrics, the playing was sweet, production value was killer. Not a fan of the thunder and such, but this is great tune, man. Very nice job ________________________ Steve Altonian View Member Profile Sep 27 2007, 01:20 PM Post #3 Group: Members Posts: 19 Joined: 17-September 07 Member No.: 19660 You really are on to something here.....Interesting concept ....everything sits where it's supposed to Sounds excellent....Keep on bringing it Steve Altonian http://www.soundclick.com/stevealtonian __________________________ clairejeanne View Member Profile Sep 27 2007, 10:22 PM Post #2 Group: Members Posts: 690 Joined: 11-March 03 Member No.: 10906 Hi Max.....WELCOME GOOD TO HAVE YOU HERE .HOPE TO HEAR MORE FROM YOU. This song is great .....in every aspect . The only thing that threw me, is the singer making a deal with God ,to take him instead ....People do this out of desperation ,but God would never make that kind of a deal .... You could keep it in there ,asking God to make a deal ... Deal or no deal LOL No deal !.But an experience with God could occur ,and He lets the singer ,live too. This is my take on this one. As for the rest of the song ,the music /vocals all very good ,indeed . Clairejeanne

Some glitch eh??

I had a litany of feedback posted, and it cropped it and put it under YOUR post????????????????????

Well, I just hope you got to see that the song actualy 'touched' some people..

But WHY would it put MY post under YOUR name??

New one on me.. must be the full moon and oddball hardware/software configurations.. ! *L*

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staggman wrote:

Is that why Lisa-Jane who is in our Band nearly split her sides laughing & said God these Bozo's are Brilliant Great god or bad opinions are good for us! She used to be signed to a Good band...but Motherhood took over but God she can sing...& thinks most the members on Click are Comedians or Clowns! really! She hasn't laughed so mch since her old Granny Died! Well done for winding that lot up Max How about we met God on Mars for our next number? Or we would wash away your sins but from America to England there just ain't enough water! Well somethin like that it's a gas for sure!...stagg

If your still not quite clear what I was talking about...

Look at your first post THIS MORNING in this thread..

I just posted the LAST post, and it transposed it onto your FIRST post in your own thread..

Just in case you thought I was just rambling about nothing.. it really is there.. I see it with me own eyes! *G*

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staggman wrote:

Is that why Lisa-Jane who is in our Band nearly split her sides laughing & said God these Bozo's are Brilliant Great god or bad opinions are good for us! She used to be signed to a Good band...but Motherhood took over but God she can sing...& thinks most the members on Click are Comedians or Clowns! really! She hasn't laughed so mch since her old Granny Died! Well done for winding that lot up Max How about we met God on Mars for our next number? Or we would wash away your sins but from America to England there just ain't enough water! Well somethin like that it's a gas for sure!...stagg

I just got my cable internet system installed.. you are my first post..

Way cool.. it took me less than a scond to connect to here rather than the 20-30 seconds it took before..

Zoom Zoom...

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staggman wrote:

Is that why Lisa-Jane who is in our Band nearly split her sides laughing & said God these Bozo's are Brilliant Great god or bad opinions are good for us! She used to be signed to a Good band...but Motherhood took over but God she can sing...& thinks most the members on Click are Comedians or Clowns! really! She hasn't laughed so mch since her old Granny Died! Well done for winding that lot up Max How about we met God on Mars for our next number? Or we would wash away your sins but from America to England there just ain't enough water! Well somethin like that it's a gas for sure!...stagg

I just got my cable internet system installed.. you are my first post..

Way cool.. it took me less than a scond to connect to here rather than the 20-30 seconds it took before..

Zoom Zoom...

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You know when I first wrote that number I was gonna scrap it but todds wouldn't let me & insisted I keep it & finish the story she was pregnant at the time!...Oh well about the Name moving thing they say God works in mysterious ways...I wonder?

Also Max me & todds have left playschool or Kinder Garten 'about guitar.com coz it's so much grief it's now in the bin!...staggs

What a feedback kinda makes me a bit scared to write a song about God on Mars!...I guess if he does exist when the big bang happened he's everywhere on all planets & his own pad..called Heaven!...yeah?

If there is another song on tbat C.D. I sent Max.... play with that too.... re-cover it & say it's from us 'Music For The World!' not you re-covered my song coz it's ours yeah?...staggs

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You know when I first wrote that number I was gonna scrap it but todds wouldn't let me & insisted I keep it & finish the story she was pregnant at the time!...Oh well about the Name moving thing they say God works in mysterious ways...I wonder? Also Max me & todds have left playschool or Kinder Garten 'about guitar.com coz it's so much grief it's now in the bin!...staggs What a feedback kinda makes me a bit scared to write a song about God on Mars!...I guess if he does exist when the big bang happened he's everywhere on all planets & his own pad..called Heaven!...yeah? If there is another song on tbat C.D. I sent Max.... play with that too.... re-cover it & say it's from us 'Music For The World!' not you re-covered my song coz it's ours yeah?...staggs

yes, as time permits (likely mioddle of next week I will find some time) I was going to work around another of your tunes.. I was shiopping through your MP3's and the CD you sent as well..

Great fun..

We'll really do up the next one and 'give em something to talk about'.. *G*

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If I send you some software for your computer (same softrware I use) are you able to figure out a learning curve of it (if I heklp you) and then if you had a Mic hooked into any soundcard, you could at least transfer vocal files back and forth with me..

Something to think about no?

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I have cool edit pro but all I've used that for is taking off scratches of multi-Beatle albums on some kinda file-wave a bit like mp3 but I got all the Beatles Albums on 1 Disk...also I have Cu-Base but not too sure of it yet especially that re-birth thing I don't understand protocols yet but I'm trying to get there Max!..

Yeah getting 'Music For the World well known is a Gas & yeah let the fun go on as Freddie Mercury would say..."The Show Must Go On!"....

Also we have the girls to sing for us too Max whenever.... BTW I've left About.com guitaqr me & todds have had enough of the childlike tatics over-there it's just like play-school!...God my own toddlers are more grown up!../.anyway like you say Max this is great fun! iI love it yeah...in about a month do you want me to write about God on Mars?...staggs

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As for some unknown reason I can't seem to get along with folk at about so now also on todds rules the time has come to say Goodbye to About probably for good I don''t wanna get hurt feelings & certainly do not wanna upset anyone...

If H makes them all happy then it's wrong of me to interfere...however back to music if you still want to be part of our team I will be delighted but if other reasons bid you away I would be very sad Max, but understand, I'm not going to be brought into squabbles coz I love friendliness.... todds says there is nothing wrong with her way, your way, & my way of thiking Max, unless anyone wants to be controlling & we let that happen she says if we do that then we do not have our own idenity!!...clever lady my todds, oh well I am off to bed be back soon....staggs

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